Free verse attempt
I liked your free style poem! Btw, all my poems are free style. I hate to constrain my ideas by trying to find a rhyming word.
Excellent free verse! Not all poetry needs to rhyme, or follow pedantic phrasing. I thought your poem perfectly expressed the ambivalence of celebrating birthdays after ‘a certain age’ keep writing!!!
I really liked your poem. It had me shaking my head in agreement with your thoughts about birthdays. I hope you write more like this!
I liked your free style poem! Btw, all my poems are free style. I hate to constrain my ideas by trying to find a rhyming word.
Excellent free verse! Not all poetry needs to rhyme, or follow pedantic phrasing. I thought your poem perfectly expressed the ambivalence of celebrating birthdays after ‘a certain age’ keep writing!!!
I really liked your poem. It had me shaking my head in agreement with your thoughts about birthdays. I hope you write more like this!